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redcloud9

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The girl who stole the stars comic
« on: January 22, 2009, 07:20:45 am »

This is the start of a comic that has been inspired by schala.the way will be become clearer later on.


www.redcloudwhite.com/stargirl.htm




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Re: The girl who stole the stars comic
« Reply #1 on: January 22, 2009, 08:54:49 am »
It seems interesting. Only one page? A good start anyway, keep it up.

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Re: The girl who stole the stars comic
« Reply #2 on: January 22, 2009, 09:41:21 am »
So it's only inspired by? And what's with everything being at the bottom of the pages? Or is that just me? Anyways, looks nice enough so far.

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Re: The girl who stole the stars comic
« Reply #3 on: January 22, 2009, 02:00:24 pm »
Hey, Stellaaa~!

I'm interested to see how this develops.

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Re: The girl who stole the stars comic
« Reply #4 on: January 22, 2009, 02:03:30 pm »
It's... um... interesting. My biggest problem was the sketchiness of it all. You may wish to scan your pages into a photo editing program (such as Photoshop) and clean it up there with a stylus, maybe even do your color there. Other than that, though, it's very nice.

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Re: The girl who stole the stars comic
« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2009, 08:32:46 pm »
REDCLOUDWHITE has a new look.please check it out.

www.redcloudwhite.com

thanx....

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Re: The girl who stole the stars comic
« Reply #6 on: March 28, 2009, 02:33:13 am »
I love that line about the stars being uneven--happens to me all the time--and I love the adorable picture of that sad little star to go along with it. Worth the price of admission alone!

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Re: The girl who stole the stars comic
« Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 02:28:33 pm »
diggin' it