CT: Frog's Destiny - Review Thread

[Ryouseiken]

Chrono Trigger: Frog's Destiny

Progress:

Prologue - DONE
Chapter 1: Frog's Troubles - DONE
Chapter 2: The Thief, Eryn - HAVEN'T STARTED

Summary:

The time is 602 AD. and Frog grows rather lonesome over the time he has not seen his friends. When he meets a peculiar thief named Eryn though things begin to change from there, and Frog has to stand up and fight alone... or does he?

Old Characters:
-Frog
-King Guardia XXI (Alden)
-Queen Leene

New Characters:
-Denas
-Eryn

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I decided that I wanted to leave my fic thread uncrowded so I can keep it nice and clean and people don't have to skip pages to read individual chapters. Not that it matters, no one seems to be TOO interested haha. But anyways yeah, all critique for "Chrono Trigger: Frog's Destiny" can go here and stuff, and I'll keep the status and info updated.

[V_Translanka]

I think WIPs are sort of FOR comments from people about your progress and such. Or else what's the point of it, really? I mean, you even say this in your WIP...

Please feel free to comment guys!

If you want me to merge these or something, you can PM me, but for now I think it's best to just stay like this.