The idea of this is really intriguing. I know it's been forever since you've updated but I still like the idea.
The flow of the writing feels a little stiff, I think something contributing to that is spacing, where dialogue is crammed with small bits of narration.
I like that you give reason for Schala to ah, "turn dark" with the abuse she had faced, remembering bad memories, Janus getting killed, the temptation of power.
