Your art is pretty good, and I'm sure with more practice it will really be great.
It looks like you knew it looked like Yakra was puking on Crono, so you felt you needed to write in 'Cyclone Attack'.
It's just the angle you chose to use, crono has his arms up, to cover himself from the puke, and Yakra has his/her mouth open. Perhaps having Yakra's mouth closed would solve the problem? But then he would look less menacing...
Either way, if you keep at it, your comic will certainly get read. Nothing here at the Compendium 'Chrono' related goes unanalyzed, or gone through with a fine-toothed comb.