Author Topic: Chrono Trigger comic: millenial fair incident, 3 new pages  (Read 788 times)

satchel_dawg

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Chrono Trigger comic: millenial fair incident, 3 new pages
« on: January 17, 2007, 08:24:38 pm »
i am working on a little bit of a comic book for ct, just some small things. and no that is crono using cyclone not yakra pucking on him.



i have a new draft of that page that looks alot better. and in mind these are just demo pages.
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Re: Chrono Trigger comic
« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2007, 01:10:40 am »
Your art is pretty good, and I'm sure with more practice it will really be great. :)

It looks like you knew it looked like Yakra was puking on Crono, so you felt you needed to write in 'Cyclone Attack'. :)

It's just the angle you chose to use, crono has his arms up, to cover himself from the puke, and Yakra has his/her mouth open. Perhaps having Yakra's mouth closed would solve the problem? But then he would look less menacing...

Either way, if you keep at it, your comic will certainly get read. Nothing here at the Compendium 'Chrono' related goes unanalyzed, or gone through with a fine-toothed comb. :)

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Re: Chrono Trigger comic
« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2007, 07:12:00 pm »
i now have like a couple complete pages i'll put up later.

i have a few pages done of the millenial fair incident.

here are those pages in watercolor!





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