hmmm i feel inspired to write now 
i think i will hmm im not sure
Then I hope you did quickly, seeing as inspiration usually does not last long. The muses are not the most constant divinities, after all.
Anyway, to comment, however, I think you should really work on the technicalities of writing. Things like making the dialogue a new paragraph and, more importantly, not running on the sentences so long. Remember, writing isn't just saying something, it's how you say it as well.
Ridley was also called her witch because she possed the power of earth magic off course she never used it except once and ever since then she tried to keep it hidden. Random sentence to prove the latter point. This should not be one sentence. 'Ridley was also called a witch becuse she possessed the power of earth magic. Of course, she never used it, except for once, and ever since then she had tried to keep it hidden.' That is more how it should read. You absolutely need that punctuation in there, otherwise it sounds like the narrator is rambling breathlessly, and makes reading difficult. Also, from what I can see, you have to be more careful with spelling and grammar.
Now, you could get someone else to do this for you, but far best is for you yourself to figure through the technicalities and edit yourself. You won't be able to catch everything - somebody else is always needed in the end - but you'll learn how to write better, removing the need for extensive editing at a later time. For example, use commas. I don't think you used a single one, but they are paramount to seperate such things as subordinate clauses. Something like a relative clause (ie. this person, who did such and such, ran. The middle part is a relative clause, the 'who' being a relative pronoun. It wouldn't quite work without the commas) or an apposition (ie. the man, ugly and scarred, ran. Here, the 'ugly and scarred' acts as a description of the man.) The only way you can really get to make use of these things on an innate basis is by practice. First it will be conscious, but you'll do it automatically in time.
