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ZeaLitY

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« on: November 01, 2006, 03:44:37 pm »
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mystical_Ninja_Starring_Goemon

And read the article, fixing any grammatical mistakes along the way. I've made it near-perfect but I would like someone else to read it as well. None of you helped with the Chrono featured article promotions; I had to solicilt help on Wikipedia and basically do it myself, so this is your chance to redeem yourselves. As a favor.
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Re: Go here
« Reply #1 on: November 01, 2006, 03:50:06 pm »
Ah, I love that game! I'll look through this and find any grammatical errors, then. :D
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Re: Go here
« Reply #2 on: November 01, 2006, 05:07:23 pm »
Quote from: ZeaLitY on November 01, 2006, 03:44:37 pm
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mystical_Ninja_Starring_Goemon

And read the article, fixing any grammatical mistakes along the way. I've made it near-perfect but I would like someone else to read it as well. None of you helped with the Chrono featured article promotions; I had to solicilt help on Wikipedia and basically do it myself, so this is your chance to redeem yourselves. As a favor.
you wouldn't want me fixing grammar.
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Re: Go here
« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2006, 11:18:27 am »
As far as I can see, there aren't any grammatical errors. :lee:
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Re: Go here
« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2006, 05:37:29 pm »
I love this game, too, yet i suck at grammer, only thing I found is:

Quote from: Gameplay
Impact can punch, kick, defend, and fire nasal bullets or a laser beam at opponents.

He can also use his chain to "catch" the enemy and pull it close, which made these fight far to easy IMO.
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ZeaLitY

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Re: Go here
« Reply #5 on: November 02, 2006, 06:36:53 pm »
Thanks. Feels good to get some help.
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Re: Go here
« Reply #6 on: November 03, 2006, 11:43:42 am »
I've found 7 typos and fixed them.
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ZeaLitY

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Re: Go here
« Reply #7 on: November 03, 2006, 06:05:50 pm »
It should be on track now.

If any of you own this game, I need you to scan the box cover. The current image came from a site, which is a no-no.
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Re: Go here
« Reply #8 on: November 03, 2006, 07:10:41 pm »
Quote from: ZeaLitY on November 03, 2006, 06:05:50 pm
It should be on track now.

If any of you own this game, I need you to scan the box cover. The current image came from a site, which is a no-no.
I own it. I don't have the cover though. T.T
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Re: Go here
« Reply #9 on: November 03, 2006, 10:04:16 pm »
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Corey Taylor

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Re: Go here
« Reply #10 on: November 03, 2006, 10:07:38 pm »
Here I got it. Atleast I think.
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ZeaLitY

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Re: Go here
« Reply #11 on: November 04, 2006, 12:41:20 am »
Quote from: Corey Taylor on November 03, 2006, 10:07:38 pm
Here I got it. Atleast I think.

Quote from: ZeaLitY on November 03, 2006, 06:05:50 pm
The current image came from a site, which is a no-no.
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Corey Taylor

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Re: Go here
« Reply #12 on: November 04, 2006, 12:44:29 am »
I saw a different pic on the Wiki. Is that the right one? The one one the Wiki?
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ZeaLitY

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« Reply #13 on: November 04, 2006, 01:16:29 am »
Still from a website, though. I'll have to get one to scan.
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Corey Taylor

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Re: Go here
« Reply #14 on: November 04, 2006, 01:19:34 am »
Oh I see what you're saying. You're not supposed to get it from a site. I thought you meant the sight was a no-no because it was the wrong pic.
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