Chrono Universe Collection

[tushantin]

@Bekkler: XD There's a reason I said "slightly". I know that the drawing focuses on realism, but the hair gives the illusion that the head is "right size". Minus the hair, and you begin noticing the strange fitting of the face to the neck: it's like someone photoshopped a child's head to an adult's body (no offense, UltimaOriginal). It just needs a slight tweaking, and it's good. As for Lucca, I wasn't talking about the size of her legs, but the shape. Besides these points, I love the detail placed in the arts, and I do respect this sincere effort!   He wanted criticism, and I gave him my point of view.

@UltimaOriginal: Man, I love Magus and Frog there! If somebody knows how to use Silo, they could make a 3D version of that image.   I can't provide any criticism on these ones though, since your art is better than mine.

Crono's 3D model is actually part of my plans for a short AMV, but that might take place after some of my other works get done. Think Fall of Guardia, and Crono's final battle with Dalton.  

[Licawolf]

Faved them both again, I particularly like Magus attitude  No emo Magus here.

My only observation is that Magus right foot should be slightly turned to the right  for him to be able to mantain the balance in that pose.

[UltimaOriginal]

I think tushantin is right about the head, he is not the only person who said that.

Licawolf: I did it at first but it indicated funny pose. Yes, it changed the view indeed. So I changed the foot and he looked more... manly.
And what about "emo" Magus thing? (did I see not many art of him? )

tushantin : 3D AMV? Like Chrono Ressurection? I'd love to see that. And it will be cool if you use the hair of my version of Crono.

p.s. Sorry, gyus. My finger is hurt, so I'll draw tomorrow. But now I'm thinking about how to draw Ayla and... Who'll be the next? We will see.

[tushantin]

tushantin : 3D AMV? Like Chrono Ressurection? I'd love to see that. And it will be cool if you use the hair of my version of Crono.

Yeah, something like it. Except it'll be toonshaded (Gurren Lagann art-style perhaps, what's it called), and certain shots will be done in 2D just to preserve me some work.

Ah, there is another Chrono art project I'd like you to participate in with me. You can help me at your leisure time, but I'll let you know once I get my UPS repaired. (God, it's taken so long...) I do ask: do you like Cedric Guardia from Crimson Echoes and Flea from Chrono Trigger? Also, are you fond of Radical Dreamers?

[UltimaOriginal]

Sorry, I didn't play Crimson Echoes yet. Actually, I couldn't find where to get it (or I'm blind). Flea? Of course I like (there will be picture soon).
Do you mean Radical Dreamers game on SNES? Yes, I do like.

[UltimaOriginal]

I have been busy lately, so from time to time I was drawing this another version of Magus.
Magus ver.2

But I think it turned out not very well.
Tomorrow I have (finally) weekend, so I can be absorbed in drawing the rest of the cast.

[Mr Bekkler]

What are ya talkin about? It looks great!

[Boo the Gentleman Caller]

I like Magus v2 better than the first Magus, actually!!!

[Manly Man]

Well, to be honest, I think you've done well, save that the hands and feet look like they're a tad small. His forearms seem to be also disproportionately small to his upper arms, whether it's just that his biceps are huge or that his elbow is too low. This doesn't mean that I think you did terrible- quite the opposite, actually- but nothing is ever perfect. Small flaws are either insubstantial or at least ignorable, but this one had a thing or two that could use improvement. Personally, I'll admit that I've got a bit of a thing for drawing large hands, considering how they can be even more expressive than the same person's face if done correctly. I'm still certain with my thoughts on the arms, though. You are a great drawer, and still have room for improvement. Everyone does,  and this is the time to seize the opportunity to get the opinions of others at what can be polished and make what you do all the more amazing.

[UltimaOriginal]

2Manly Man - Yes, you're absolutely right. I'm showing pics not just "to show", also to hear your opinions and mistakes, that you find. Thanks!

I redrew her two times and I decided to keep this version - Ayla

[Boo the Gentleman Caller]

Ayla looks great... But as a critique, her legs look a tad on the short side.

[CuyahogaRiver]

very nice

[UltimaOriginal]

Ok, here is update. I decided to spend more time on each picture. There is no need to hurry, I guess. Thus I can also practice coloring works.

Schala & Janus

[Manly Man]

I like it. How you do the colors makes it look very fitting for the mood you're presenting. It looks like watercolor, and that tends to go well with sadder feelings about the picture; it gives an effect reminiscent of tears, or at least it does to me.

Again, though, the proportions are off. The hands are too small and the head looks a bit big. I've had the same problem for quite some time about the head size, but it's far from impossible to work on. I hope you can get the technique and proportions down pat.

[Mr Bekkler]

I think the color is great, but if I had to nit-pick, something about those shorts on Janus seems weird.