Difference between revisions of "Fanfiction:ZeaLitY Poetry DOZ"
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Among enchanted wood, lit by moon’s flight. | Among enchanted wood, lit by moon’s flight. | ||
5 Yet I was high above, in cloudy freezes, | 5 Yet I was high above, in cloudy freezes, | ||
| − | Adrift; immersed in an Enhasian dream, | + | Adrift; immersed in an Enhasian dream, |
On a jeweled, cushioned bed of Zealian crest – | On a jeweled, cushioned bed of Zealian crest – | ||
Free to love the coming Autumn; to sight | Free to love the coming Autumn; to sight | ||
Revision as of 05:53, 1 November 2004
Days of Zeal
September 16, 2004
Line 14 was originally
“When we are near, and gazing into our eyes.�
_Â Â Richly dark, the orchestra of the night
Played softly its summer, starlit breezes,
As we met within the aura-filled for’st,
Among enchanted wood, lit by moon’s flight.
5 Yet I was high above, in cloudy freezes,
Adrift; immersed in an Enhasian dream,
On a jeweled, cushioned bed of Zealian crest –
Free to love the coming Autumn; to sight
Endless waves below – ripples and creases,
10 Which caressed as dreams the world to blue rest –
For all passions and colors, brighter seem
From vantage of majestic isle in sky –
And too, with new luster, the world gleams –
_ When I am near, gazing into thine eyes.
