Days of Zeal
September 16, 2004
Line 14 was originally
“When we are near, and gazing into our eyes.�
| _ | Richly dark, the orchestra of the night
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Played softly its summer, starlit breezes,
As we met within the aura-filled for’st,
Among enchanted wood, lit by moon’s flight.
| 5 | Yet I was high above, in cloudy freezes,
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Adrift; immersed in an Enhasian dream,
On a jeweled, cushioned bed of Zealian crest –
Free to love the coming Autumn; to sight
Endless waves below – ripples and creases,
| 10 | Which caressed as dreams the world to blue rest –
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For all passions and colors, brighter seem
From vantage of majestic isle in sky –
And too, with new luster, the world gleams –
When I am near, gazing into thine eyes.
From: Fanfiction#ZeaLitY
