So, I write a lot of poetic fanfiction. I think I prefer it to story-based fanfiction as I'm horrible at writing setting for others' characters and I always feel I'll end up Sue-ing someone
In any case, I've done a couple Chrono Trigger poems lately, so I thought I'd post them here. I'd love any suggestions as to how to improve.
Only YouAh, if only to go back to those days
Bliss of blue
Floating high above without care
To go back to the place I was born in
A place I didn't have to...
Didn't have to show a snarl
Didn't have to spit and growl
Snark a facade
For what really lies inside
Ah, if only to go back to you
Blissful blue
Singing to me while stroking my hair
To go back to the place where I sinned
The place where I left you...
Didn't have to scream "You fools!"
Didn't have to follow my own rule
Smirk a facade
For what really lies inside
Ah, if only to leave this place
Cursed and blue
Joining with them so I might dare
To go back to the place where it all begins
So it will again be two...
Didn't have to turn away
Didn't have to hide my face
Tears, no facade
For what really lies inside
I don't care about them
I only want to be with you
I don't care about them
I only want to be with you
I don't care
I only want
I don't care about them
Sister, I only want you
1999 ADCombination
Saturation
You had it coming
Violation
Subjugation
Moderation
Through the eyes of
Modern nation
Choose you, use you
Trust me, open your eyes and see
Open your eyes and you better
Goddamn well see!
You had it coming
Inside was growing
Starting, shocking
Never hoping
Break your eyes and
Shut the glass
Fire's raining
Don't look back
Can't change your past
Flagellation
Altercation
Scream and see your
Immolation
Burn and die
You had it coming
Inside was growing
Starting, shocking
Never hoping
Break your eyes and
Shut the glass
Fire's raining
Don't look back
Can't change your past
Don't go back
Can't change your past
End of time
And end of life
End of youth
End of screams
End of your world
Corruption, self-destruction
You had it coming
Inside was growing
Starting, shocking
Never hoping
Break your eyes and
Shut the glass
Fire's raining
Don't look back
Can't change your past
These can also be found on my DeviantArt,
http://lordblumiere.deviantart.com.